Author's Note: this story had to have a girl with big dreams on a snowy afternoon for Language Arts.
One snowy afternoon in New York City a girl with big dreams named LaFonda set out to find Buddy the Elf. She saw the movie and had an instant obsession over Buddy. She searched in the Empire State building, Broadway, Manhattan Bridge, Brooklyn Bridge, Gimbel’s and Yankee Stadium but yet still no sign of him accept there was no chewed up gum under the railings. She knew right away that he was here but if he wasn’t there, any good Buddy the Elf fan knew where he would be.
A few days later LaFonda arrived in the North Pole. She went to Santa’s factory and asked Poppa Elf where Buddy was and he said “look in the candy cane forest, his fort is there”.
So the next day she traveled to the candy cane forest by riding Mr. Narwhal. She arrived to the candy cane forest in a jiffy and found Buddy the Elf in a feeble position sprouting a full beard.
I think this piece is good, but in the first paragraph when you said "She searched in the Empire State building, Broadway, Manhattan Bridge, Brooklyn Bridge, Gimbel’s and Yankee Stadium but yet still no sign of him accept there was no chewed up gum under the railings" accept should be except.
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