Thursday, March 8, 2012

Describing Perry from Fallen Angels

Author's Note: This piece was made to describe Perry

It was a calm cool night in Vietnam, as cool as a cold shower. Perry was walking alone, alone as the number one. He was looking for a companion because of his lonely heart. What he was wearing wasn't much. Just a dirty ragged army uniform that looked like one dollar. You could tell the way he looked that he was looking for a friend. Maybe more than a friend, someone he could be with for millions of years. He acted like he was out of his homeland, which he was. All he attracted was flies with the way he smelt, he smelled like 25 year old dung. He twitched every second from nervousness of being attacked by V.C.

Then a young attractive American woman walked his way. What should he say? What should he do? All he could think about was I like licking lollipops that taste like lemons. She looked at him as if he said the funniest thing in the world. She asked if he wanted to get out to eat and of course he said yes. When they were eating he didn’t know what to say he was so nervous.

2 comments:

  1. Very nice job on figurative language. You should try to describe the character better otherwise very nice piece.

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  2. I think you described Peewee very well. Just as I pictured him.

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